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November 20th, 2017 03:08 PM —
Start of my story
Hay, I started writing this story. Tell me what you think! I couldn’t believe all that had happened in the last 48 hours. When I woke up two days ago I had no idea that my life, as I had known it, was over. I’ve seen so much more and learned so much more in the last two days than I had in my whole life. Then I saw it, the black unmarked van, rounding the corner, headed straight towards me. I ran as hard as I could, tried to ditch them in an alley, and made sudden turns down narrow side streets, but I couldn’t shake them. They were not giving up easily now. I had seen too much, They knew no matter how much they gave me, I wouldn’t keep quiet. ———————————§——————————— 48 hours earlier. “Get up wimp!” “Uuuu.” Was all that I could manage. Who would be waking me up this early? My groggy, still-half-asleep brain thought. Then my brain woke up the rest of the way. No, no, not Mason and his gang, not this early. I hadn’t even had breakfast yet, that is if I could have managed to find Breakfast. “What do you want M?” I asked sarcastically. “what do you think I am, a retard?” He and his gang laughed. “ya.” I said matter of factly. As soon as I said that I knew it was a big mistake. he and his gang shut up instantly.” oh, I see how it is. you will regret this, now and threough out the rest of your life. which may not be very long.” at least the first part of his threat was true. he and his gang beat me up and left me in the alley. I tried to get up, but he and his gang beat me up pretty good. once I finally managed to get up I went out in the search of food. ———————————§——————————— --CURRENTLY INACTIVE--
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November 20th, 2017 07:01 PM —
RE: Start of my story
Homeless... Plot twist of the century. Seems like a pretty good start for a story though. If you finish it I'd be happy to read it because it really peaked my interest. You sir are a very creative writer and the story itself feels like I'm reading the prologue to a book. Please finish it! ♡
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November 21st, 2017 10:51 AM —
RE: Start of my story
gg. Good story overall as is, please finish it! I'm down to read more of interesting story arcs like this! J̶̡̨̡̡̡̠̥͕̼̳͙̝͔͉̱̼̭͖̗̹͇̝͕̮̥̻̮̬̞̖̪̦̺̮̖͉̦̳͇͇̝͓̥̪̗͍͔͍̦̝͈͔̦̳̟̼̠̜̭͇͋͊͒͊̿̃͐͐͑̔̃̋̔̂̉̎̽̉̽̓́̄̑̓̌̿̍̽̉̔͌̋̋̓͌̑͌͂̓̈́̾̈̓̆̒͘̕͘͘͜͝͝͠͠ͅű̶̢̢̨̡̨̢̡̢̧̢̦̼̜̜̣̮̰̦͇̻̝̼̗̝͓͕͖͉̺̹̘̥̜̠͈͓̙̭̰̠̜͈̬̩̩̖̖̗͙̯͎͔͍̗͙̥̼̙̰̲̳͇̤̠̪̼̭̬͌ş̴̡̨̪̪̠͙͚̲̥̺͍̜̥̰̤͕̹͉̭̱̰̰͎͍̱͚̝̬̺̜̺̲͙̼̱͙̗͎̲͓͍͆̔͌͒̓̆̆͐̌̑͒̾̏͆͌̓͆̑̑̏͐̿̂̑̎̆̈́̅̈̂̒̄̃̈́̚͜͝͝͠͠͝͝͝ţ̷̢̧̧̡̣̞͇͓̱̯̦͙̩͓͚̲̥̹̤̦͕̼̜̲̝͇̦̫̗̫̰̙̥̜̤̗̣̯̱͓̪͖̗̝̭̩̤̘̤̤̳̯͈̞̫̯͍̞̤̀̓̈́́́͐͐̌̽̆́͌̽͒̂̄̀̾̅́͘̚̕͜͜͝͝͠ ̸̡̢̢̡̹̪͇̟̻̯̠̞̜͈̝̘̫͇̲̱͚̞̩͍̠͇̤̹͇̖̠̳̥̪̟͙̰̰͙̟̝̰̟̻̉͗͊͛̃̎̂̐̈́̐͋̈́͂͒̈̓̕͜͝M̴̧͎̱̫͓̟̦̰͓̘̮̼̮̞̉̓̀͂̿̐̎̔̆̈́̀̓̄́̍̀̂̒͌̄̀̔̾̋́̽͊̀̈́̀́̀̆͘̚͘͝ǫ̴̢̧̡̛͔̳̖̙͕͕̥͖̟̺̠̤̣̝̗̫͖͔̹͚̘̝͖̫̠͍͔͖̝̦̼͕͓͓̹͔̮̼̣̤͂͐̊̒̊͛̏́͆̽͐̄̈́̉̓̄͋͂̔̾̾̋̏̌̍̇̈́͛̄̚͘̚̚͜͜͠͝ͅṉ̵̨̧̢̧̢̢̜̹̼̰̺̰̥̫̝̹̦̜̦̯̹̻̻͎̟̗̻̦̤̩͓͎̫̝͕̜̙̩̻̤̖͉̤̰͕̩̒͒̈́͑̾̉͒̈́͗̅́̏̈́̑̓͘͘͜͜i̴̧̛̞̖̺̰̱̠̰̫̠̼̠̦̦͓͙͈͙͓̙̫̣̦̯̠̜̻̠̳̊́́͋́͛̃͛͂͐̐̄͘̕͝k̵̛͕̰̞͍͍̮̬͉̳̫̮̲̟͖̳͈̳̮̱̜̖̟͈͖̤̞̭̱̀͑̎͗͋̅̃̐͛̈́̓̓̂̋̚͜͜͜͝͝ͅą̸̡̧̧̢̨̡̨̝͉̹̙̖̩͚̺̠̱̯̳͔̙̠̺̙̰̦̘̹͓̹̗̟̹̦̯͇͙̳͍͖̬͆̍̑̍͛̀̉̎̽̂̓̓̍̊̋̈́͊́̉̊̂̎͋̇̒̕̕͘̕͜͜͜͠
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November 21st, 2017 07:46 PM —
RE: Start of my story
Thanks everyone! --CURRENTLY INACTIVE--
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December 12th, 2017 01:47 PM —
RE: Start of my story
I really want to see more of this, its well done Well well well
Someones reading my profile signature??? What a mistake thats m a d cringe. Shameless twitter Plug https://mobile.twitter.com/Withercraftian Dogwater art below      I do art things Well, I do them if I ever get my motivation. Uh Currently lacking any sort of social common sense. I reallyyyy think I need therapy for it. I do sincerely apologize if I annoy anyone or cringe someone out Or kill a conversation. College Sucks. I sometimes have a hard time trying to find reason to get out of bed in the morning Annywayssss Have a lovely rest of your day You have completed Secret Dungeon Story Mode! Completion Time: 13:14:35 |
